STALKER MOTION 1
Location: Bus 5
Date & Time: 2nd May 2008 / 3+pm
I was on my way to school. Meeting up with my classmates after my Friday prayers as class was Photography Class canceled for the day. Instead of doing my normal routine which i normally do while in the bus,<playing games on my PSP> this lady caught my eye. She look kinda troubled. I noticed, she frowns alot. Guess there was too many things on her mind. She also kept looking out of the glass window and set to stone-ing motion. I don’t know how long I stared at her because the next moment i found out, i had miss my stop. Damn, i am going to be so late.
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STALKER MOTION 2
Location: Dinner and Dance @ Mariott Hotel
Date & Time: 2nd May 2008 / 9+pm
Well, dinner started about 2 hours ago but i came in late. Around 7.50pm, i reached Mariott Hotel with Farhan. Shaun had already reserved a seat for us. During the dinner, my eyes, somehow or rather, zoom in onto this pretty girl. Found out, my friend was also looking at her. <Laugh as in haha>. She is pretty. Pretty cute i say. Its the smile. She’s nice to look at. From the look of it(the way she present herself and the way she talks to the others, i am sure that she is one of the popular girl during her secondary school. During the whole night, she was pretty bubbly. Talking with her peeps and mingled around. If you still do not believe me, there’s a picture of her below. The left side is Peibao, my GL’s. She too, is pretty. She is on the right side. Pretty Cute isn’t she. Drools.
PeiBao & Gracia

There’s not enough here on your thoughts about the characters’ actions and behavior as well as their physicality. Without those, you don’t have material to construct characters for a story.
Comment by theredpants — August 6, 2008 @ 5:02 am