HotStuFF

Visual Trigger

Names have been changed to protect the identity of the person. This picture was definitely not taken for this assignment. It was all a mere coincidental. Thank you.

Eqa was thinking what went wrong. They had all used to be closed. Just like siblings. They have known each other for almost two years but Eqa had known Gaybrol for seven years. She was her closest friend. Probably that is why Gaybrol is the only one that is still in talking terms with her. Gaybrol and her boyfriend, Eugene. They have been in relationship for almost six years now. While Ah Wan, Adelinna and Adizn were all either not in talking terms with her or were speaking sarcastically.

Just weeks ago, they were all chilling at Haji Lane together, smoking Sisha but now. “Eqa listen to me. Do you know why we are not as close as before? Think Eqa.” Asked Gaybrol. “Reflect what you did for the past two weeks. Probably then, you will know what went wrong.” “Argh. I don’t know! Leave me alone Bitch! You are just like the others.” Burst Eqa, anger in her voice could be heard. Tears ran down Gaybrol checks as she sees her bestfriend walk away. “Everything is going to be alright. Believe me, Honey.” Says Eugene. It hurts him everytime seeing her cry.

Eqa was walking towards the bus stop when suddenly she felt someone pulling her away. She was pushed to the wall. Looking up to see who was responsible for it, she saw. “E-e-eu-eugene-ne!” stammered Eqa the moment she saw him. “Eqa, you really want to know what happened? Well, you don’t really care what others feel till it turn out like this. For a girl who had everything One could ever asked for, you don’t know when to say things at the correct timing. Well, let me tell you this. You hurt people because you are being too frank and you never care and try to know how the felt. You are oblivious to your surrounding. If you don’t try to change, Eqa, you probably would lose Gaybrol too. Think about it.” Says Eugene before he walks away.
Eqa drop to her knees. Doing a reflection as everyone walk past. To and fro they go, to and fro her mind goes. Yeah. Now that Eugene told her what she had done wrong, she began to realized. Over the past years, she had never really care what others felt. She will change. For the better, before everything that is precious to her leaves her.

Tell me, Tell me, Tut tut tut tut tell me”(RING TONE) “Hello,” ”Gaybrol, its me, Eqa. I just want to say.”Tuuuuuttuuuuuut”(Hang up)

Perhaps it is already too late. Everything she once had is gone. It is never going to be the same again. She has to live with that. Start over a new and hopes that she managed to overcome her flaws and pay more attention to what others is feeling.

1 Comment »

  1. This story has a tragic ending but does not follow the conventions of greek tragedy where a character inadvertently causes his or her own downfall.

    Comment by theredpants — August 6, 2008 @ 5:07 am


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